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Welcome to Meljean Brook today for more Spooky Legends fun, this time with a steampunk twist. I’m seriously addicted to her new Iron Seas series (steampunk romance with a paranormal punch!) which is why I’m extra excited to spend some time with Mina Wentworth from the just released THE IRON DUKE and read her take on the “The Hook” urban legend. And don’t miss the giveaway for a copy of THE IRON DUKE. See details below.
Meljean was raised in the middle of the woods, and hid under her blankets at night with fairy tales, comic books, and romances. She left the forest and went on a misguided tour through the world of accounting before focusing on her first loves, reading and writing–and she realized that monsters, superheroes, and happily-ever-afters are easily found between the covers, as well as under them, so she set out to make her own. Meljean lives in Portland, Oregon with her husband and daughter.

Mina Wentworth on “The Hook”
by
Meljean Brook
A resounding snore from the driver’s side of the cart told Mina that Constable Newberry had fallen asleep for the third time since midnight. She couldn’t blame him. From the moment he’d collected Mina from her doorstep the previous morning, they’d barely had a moment to rest. A strangling in a Limehouse rookery had been followed by a stabbing at Temple Fair—and although thirty people had witnessed that murder, not a one had been willing to tell her who’d wielded the knife.
Not one while they’d been at the fair, that was. Five minutes after returning to police headquarters with the body, she’d received a message from the squealer Tommy Haymaker: if she met him on Anglesey Street beside the Somerset House stables at midnight, he’d tell her what he’d seen in exchange for a few pennies.
The time for that meeting had passed hours before. Tommy Haymaker hadn’t shown, Mina’s bottom had long gone numb on the cart’s bench seat, but she and Newberry wouldn’t be returning to their beds yet. A fog choked the streets, and even with the cart’s gas lanterns burning on full, she couldn’t see five feet through the thick yellow mist. Leaving now, they’d be as likely to drive into the Thames as arrive safely at their homes. So she’d let Newberry sleep.
He didn’t for long. After only ten minutes, the constable woke, rubbing his palms against his heavy side whiskers as if he could brush the exhaustion from his face. He glanced over at Mina, who watched him with raised brows. She wasn’t surprised by the sudden color in his cheeks—she’d quickly learned that her new assistant blushed easily. If he’d known that she’d heard his snores, he might have combusted on the spot.
Newberry cleared his throat. “I’ll keep watch now, sir, if you want to rest.”
“It’s hardly safe to let one’s guard down in this part of town, constable.”
“No, sir.” His blush deepened, but a stubborn sort of pride appeared in the set of his whiskered jaw. “But as I’m your guard, you wouldn’t be.”
“So you are.” A good man, her Newberry. Mina wouldn’t be able to sleep, though, not if the only position available to her was with her head hanging over the back of the bench and her throat exposed. She looked out into the fog. “But on this stretch of the Thames, it behooves us to have two sets of eyes. Did you hear of The Fisherman in Manhattan City, constable?”
Though Newberry had only recently arrived in London from the New World, some stories crossed oceans. This one obviously hadn’t, however. The constable shook his head.
“It was in all the newssheets here—a series of murders shortly after the revolution,” Mina said. “But the newssheets said it began while the Horde was still in power. They claimed that the murderer had once been a fisherman on the Thames— Have you seen one yet, Newberry?”
“A fisherman, sir?” Newberry’s forehead creased, as if trying to fathom why she’d ask such a question. “Plenty of them, out on the boats.”
Mina shook her head, lifting her hands and curving her fingers. “The Horde grafted on hooks and retractable chains, the better to haul up the catch. But this fisherman, they said his hook caught on one of the giant eels. It pulled him overboard and dragged him down, through all of the bodies down there in the muck.”
He frowned. “Bodies at the bottom, sir? The bodies in the river east of Manhattan City always floated after a day or two.”
Good. Even exhausted, her assistant had a fine head on his shoulders. “Not if they have a steel prosthetic weighing them down, constable.”
Newberry appeared doubtful, but nodded.
“And the fisherman...either the eel’s electric shock or the sight of those bodies broke something in his mind, and he went mad. Even the Horde’s nanoagents couldn’t control him—and so they locked him away studied him. The newssheets speculated that he escaped in the chaos of the revolution, and came back to the river.” Mina pointed ahead through the fog to where, on a clear night, they could have seen the joining of bridge and street. “Back to the Trahaearn Bridge.”
Of course, the bridge hadn’t been called that, then. But after the Iron Duke had blown up the Horde’s tower and sparked the revolution, they’d replaced the Horde governor’s name with his.
Mina continued, “The newssheets claimed that the fisherman waited beneath the bridge, in the water, breathing through a pipe and eating any fish that swam his way. It wasn’t long before he emerged from the river, however, and in the year after I joined the force, we began finding corpses in this area, each of them gutted and filleted. Another inspector handled the case, but I examined a few of the bodies, and discovered that although some of the injuries had been delivered with a knife, the gut wounds suggested that the weapon was both curved and sharply pointed.”
Newberry grimaced slightly. He often tried to hide his distaste for the morbid exams that Mina performed during their investigations, but he must have been too tired to successfully conceal it.
Once, Mina would have been irritated by his response. Tonight, it only amused her. And she supposed that if the poor man had the bad luck to be stuck in a cart with her for several hours, he’d earned a grimace or two.
Especially as she planned to extract a blush or two in return. “As soon as the newssheets got hold of the weapon’s description, the speculation and rumors began—with those older stories about the fisherman at the forefront. But we weren’t certain it was a fisherman...not until he murdered George Ploughman. We had a witness, then: Jenny Blacksmith, who said that she and Ploughman were making time in the old stables, when those hooks came down from the rafters and caught Ploughman with his trousers around his ankles. Then the chains reeled him up, leaving her there with her skirts up.”
And there it was. In the lanterns’ dim glow, Newberry’s face had become red as a beet.
Ah, New Worlders. Instead of being horrified by the details of a murder, he was mortified by the scandalous bits.
Afraid that she would burst into laughter if she opened her mouth too soon, Mina paused for a long moment, staring into the fog. A few shadows moved past the cart, dark shapes that quickly dissolved into nothing. Laborers at the start of their day—or just returning home. They wouldn’t have the luxury of waiting until the fog lifted and it was safe to go.
“After that, we searched every inch of this area for The Fisherman, with no inspector or constable allowed to be alone, even for a moment. And it was a night similar to this that Constable Swift and I were caught out in the fog...and we waited, just as we are now, with the canvas top up and the lanterns on high. Now and again we’d see someone through the mist. We’d hear a scratch against the side of the cart, followed by metal tapping against metal. I thought perhaps a ratcatcher had been drawn to the heat of the boiler, so I told the constable to step outside and have a look.”
Newberry leaned forward, peering through the front glass, his gaze searching through the fog. “And then what, sir?”
“And then I heard nothing. No scratching—and no Constable Swift. But I saw the drops, here.” Mina reached out, touching the windshield glass on Newberry’s side of the cart. “Blood. So I opened the door...and there was Swift, hanging over the canvas roof with two hooks buried in him—and then those chains pulled him up into the fog. We never found his body. And we never caught the Fisherman.”
Newberry touched the spot where the blood had fallen...then sat back and eyed her for a long second. “We haven’t worked together very long, sir, but I do know this: You wouldn’t have sent the constable out alone. And you’d still be searching for this fisherman, if there ever was one.”
She truly did like him. Just on principle, however, she raised her brows at his ‘if’—but the paling of Newberry’s face, his sudden reach for his weapon halted her response. She followed his alarmed gaze, saw the shadow coming closer ... the shape of the hook.
Mina grabbed Newberry’s arm, stopped him before he could shoot.
“Newberry, stop! That’s Tommy Haymaker. That’s our squealer!” When he looked at her in disbelief, she said, “He used to toss bales at the stables. By the starry skies, constable—in some parts of this town, you’ll find more hooks than hands!”
Newberry nodded, swallowing hard, and holstered his weapon. “I suppose, sir, that the real scary story is the Horde, and all that they did.”
A story? To him, perhaps, and to anyone who didn’t live it. But she wouldn’t argue that now.
“There are still monsters and murderers out there, constable. So let us go find out this one’s name...and then go find him.”
Mina opened her door, and looked back to see Newberry tip his hat back, check the roof of the cart before stepping out, as if searching for hooks and chains.
He saw her looking—and blushed. “Just keeping my guard up, sir.”
She hadn’t expected anything less. A damn good man, her Newberry.
Thanks so much Meljean. I hope you’ll come back soon!
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Want to read more from Meljean Brook?
Guardians
1. Demon Angel
2. Demon Moon
3. Demon Night
4. Demon Bound
5. Demon Forged
6. Demon Blood






Iron Seas
1. The Iron Duke (read Review)

Anthologies
Hot Spell
Wild Thing
First Blood
Must Love Hellhounds (read Review)
Burning Up





Giveaway
Giveaway courtesy of Meljean Brook
One copy of THE IRON DUKE by Meljean Brook

After the Iron Duke freed England from Horde control, he instantly became a national hero. Now Rhys Trahaearn has built a merchant empire on the power — and fear — of his name. And when a dead body is dropped from an airship onto his doorstep, bringing Detective Inspector Mina Wentworth into his dangerous world, he intends to make her his next possession.
Mina can’t afford his interest, however. Horde blood runs through her veins, and despite the nanotech enhancing her body, she barely scratches out a living in London society. Becoming Rhys’s lover would destroy both her career and her family, yet the investigation prevents her from avoiding him…and the Iron Duke’s ruthless pursuit makes him difficult to resist.
But when Mina uncovers the victim’s identity, she stumbles upon a conspiracy that threatens the lives of everyone in England. To save them, Mina and Rhys must race across zombie-infested wastelands and treacherous oceans — and Mina discovers the danger is not only to her countrymen as she finds herself tempted to give up everything to the Iron Duke.
Click HERE to read an excerpt from THE IRON DUKE
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That was fantastic, that dialogue gave me goosebumps! Thanks so much for the wonderful read, Meljean.
ReplyDeleteThat was great, Meljean, thanks for sharing it with us.
ReplyDeleteGreat column. Best "hook" story yet. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteFABULOUS! Thank you for sharing this wonderful short from Meljean. I love the world of the Iron Seas!
ReplyDeleteGreat post, thanks. will add this to my wish list.
ReplyDeleteThis is my favorite Spooky Legend to date! I could see the fog rolling around them as Mina told her tale. And Newberry blushing at the scandalous bits had me chuckling. Great story!
ReplyDeleteAnd now I'm really curious about Mina and Rhys so I guess this book gets added to my TBR!!!
This is very a good story!! Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteThe Iron Duke looks like a very good read!!
Thanks for sharing this post with us!!!
ReplyDeleteGreat story, I really enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteMeljean thanks for posting and sharing with us. I loved it.
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I haven't read any of Meljean's books but I've heard such fantastic things about them, especially The Iron Duke! Thank you for the opp!
ReplyDeleteGreat story, Meljean. I've heard really good things about The Iron Duke so I ran out and bought a copy. Looking forward to reading the book.
ReplyDeleteThanks Meljean! There wasn't enough messing with Newberry's puritanical sensibilities in The Iron Duke.
ReplyDeleteI'll add my love for Newberry too. I'm so glad we got another peak at him today. Thanks Meljean!
ReplyDeleteThank you, everyone -- and to Abigail, ATUF, and Dark Faerie Tales for hosting such a fun event!
ReplyDeleteahahahaha! poor Newberry! But Mina almost got herself in a pickle with her crazy story; old Newberry mighta shot her witness, lol!
ReplyDeleteBut I've a question: why does he keep calling her "sir"? lol Im really starting to enjoy this steampunk stuff:)
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Hi Bella!
ReplyDeleteThe "sir" is in deference to her rank of detective inspector. Normally, she'd be referred to as "my lady" or "her ladyship", but those titles don't hold the same meaning for people living in London as they do someone like Newberry (who is from Manhattan City.)
But there's also the gender component (a female officer today would be called "ma'am", and so would many other women in historical times -- including titled ladies.) But her superior, Superintendent Hale, is also a woman, and she recently came from Manhattan City, too -- where she was denied a job in the police force because of her sex. So when she came to London and joined the newly-formed police force, she set the precedent of being called 'sir', to emphasize that her rank and her authority were equal to a man's.
Mina followed her example.
Thanks so much for a brilliant giveaway!!
ReplyDeleteHook is another of my favorites.
ReplyDeleteHaven't read any of her books. really like to start one soon !!
ReplyDeleteAwesome interview and giveaway.
ReplyDeleteOh I absolutely loved this! Thanks for answering that "sir" question since I was curious about it too.
ReplyDeleteI've heard so many good things about The Iron Duke and it's on my wishlist. I hope to read it soon.
A fantastic take on the urban legend. Definitely makes me want to read more about Mina's world.
ReplyDeleteThanks for hosting such a fun giveaway!
ReplyDeletelove the story!! thank you for the contest, i can't wait to read this!
ReplyDeleteAwesomeness! Thanks for sharing Meljean! And thanks for the giveaway! I'm so looking forward to reading The Iron Duke!
ReplyDeleteGreat story Meljean :) Fun
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